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Going Home, But Not Going Back

8/6/2026

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Camel advertisement at Munich airportWow, the best of the airport!
August is now upon us, and true to form for educators, it means some of us have already started classes, and the rest will be shortly. For me, it means the summer reprieve is thankfully ending. I don’t say it in some wanton manner, just matter-of-fact to get back into a routine of sorts, to embrace my new haunt of Wroclaw, and see what this new opportunity is all about.

True to form, I’m writing this from the Munich airport, no less, where I have been waiting for my connecting flight, oh nine or so hours. While I would love to focus on the parent who thinks it's appropriate to play soccer with his kids in the middle of the seats, or the guy who keeps walking laps on his phone, talking loud enough so we all know his company business, I’m going to focus on the writing process and personal reflection. 

While I waited patiently at the airport, feasted on Wiener Schnitzel, and had copious amounts of water to offset my flight over the Atlantic, I also spent four or so hours editing. Forever Poland might be out, but I told myself that before I could start any new projects, I needed to revisit Swimming with Angels and Going Home. At the very least, I needed to read them again.

German meal at airportA proper dinner at the airport.
What strikes me as odd is that I must have been in some COVID haze the last time I turned to those projects. Both copies I have on file are from 2021, and for the most part they are a riddled mess. I know I lost the most recent version, which sucks to say the least. I should be bothered, but it’s not like either book has been moving off the shelf in the last five years. To that end, last summer I made some tweaks to Running with Vince so that I could reissue the book on Apple, Google Books, and Barnes and Noble. It only made sense to do the same with these follow-up books even if they are beyond wordy. Yes, that’s my take on my older stories. If I see smiled, nodded his head, or anything not overly descriptive that has a synonym that offers some real variety, I might cry myself to sleep. Then again, I still could. 

As a storyteller, I will share that I appreciate reading these older works and seeing how my tone, style, and verbiage have changed. I do agree with Stephen King that the more one reads, the more their craft improves. Prior to 2021, I didn’t read as much as I should have. I even had a cockamamie reason that reading other books would impact my projects and I would, in effect, be copying others. 

That can’t be farther from the truth, because I don’t read books in the same genres I am writing. Even when I do, I know that I don’t write action sequences the way others do, or even describe situations in the same flowing prose. Knowing that Stephen King has a far superior track record, I listened to the master and shifted to reading more, where now I’m averaging forty books a year. I’m not a crazy reader, but I do set aside time because I know it helps.

During this summer break, my reading has been more constricted to current projects, but even so, reading old books and wondering how things could change is good for perspective, whether the words are edited or not. I, for one, will be happy to work on the third book in the Stokes series, but it’s okay to wait a few more weeks or even months. Rumor has it that the newest edition of Swimming with Angels is already out.

Manning Lake in New HampshireManning Lake - the central setting for the Vincent Chronicles.
The title for this blog uses Going Home, which is the title of the third book in The Vincent Chronicles. Originally, the book was titled Standing with God, which was intentional with three words like the other two book titles in the series, and the fact that Vincent’s journey goes from twin brother to ghost to angel who helps all. 

For me, it’s been a nice exercise revisiting these books, because I am reminded of my lifelong connection to Manning Lake, Gilmanton Iron Works, and the Lakes Region of New Hampshire. Even though I haven’t read these books in years, reviewing them now, I remember where I was when I wrote different scenes, and why I elected to present the story in a given light. More importantly, I am able to focus on home, and on those places in New Hampshire that meant so much to me. 

As the years have passed, I moved away from that region, for that matter out of the country. Now, when I visit, there are only warm memories, because I realize that for me, I can’t be like Christian and go back, settle, and trust that the universe will take care of everything. Teaching and living overseas has filled a different void, leaving the stagnant energy behind, and forcing me, even in incremental steps, to get out of my comfort zone. 

With my flight to Wroclaw set to leave in two hours, I’m looking forward to this next challenge, to creating a home that serves and resonates more than my last few stops. My books remind me of good times and a childhood I wish all could have, but it’s also a marker that change is good. As an adult, the best change is taking a risk and seeing what life has to offer. Sometimes, getting out your front door is the biggest challenge and adventure. One never knows…

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Forever Poland - A Travel Memoir

7/31/2026

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Cover of Forever Poland a memoir by Jonathan Kuiper
When Jonathan Kuiper first set foot in Poland, he expected an interesting trip. What he didn't expect was to fall under the country's spell.

In Forever Poland, as a teacher living in Kraków, Jonathan spends a year exploring one of Europe's most misunderstood nations. What begins as curiosity soon becomes a personal journey across historic cities, quiet towns, and unexpected landscapes.
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From the reborn streets of Warsaw to the Baltic charm of Sopot, from pilgrimage sites like Częstochowa to forgotten corners of the countryside, Jonathan travels by train, on foot, and sometimes by sheer impulse—discovering places guidebooks rarely linger on. Along the way, he encounters Poland's deep Catholic traditions, the scars of war and occupation, and the quiet resilience of a culture that refuses to lose its identity.

Part travel memoir, part personal reflection, Forever Poland is a story of wandering through a country layered with history while slowly realizing that some places don't just welcome visitors—they claim them.

For readers who love travel, history, and stories about discovering unexpected homes around the world, this is an invitation to experience Poland through the eyes of someone who keeps finding reasons to return.

Copies Available Here
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Three Years Later: Poland, Writing, Vlogging, and Trying to Balance It All

6/10/2026

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A perfect message in a perfect locationI hope to stop back here and leave another message for other travelers this summer.
I got a notification on the morning of June 6th, celebrating three years on YouTube. There was a brief smile and the realization that it was more like my 3.5 year anniversary, since there had been a channel before the current one. Oh yes, there was a glorious channel, maybe not glorious, but one molded out of significant travel and exploration of Poland and other countries in Europe, during my stint in Krakow.

While those original vlogs no longer exist, as I deleted the first channel in an absurd move to find a better balance and clarity, or we should just label it as temporary insanity, the majority of those cities and towns have gotten new vlogs on the current channel, with only a few spots still needing further attention.

Perhaps over the next year, once I’m back in Poland full-time, I will return to Lublin and Lancut to check those things off my to-do list. Then again, I doubt I’ll be heading to Kosice, Berlin, and Thessaloniki anytime soon, but hey, one never knows… Malta does need a return trip. 

I’m grateful that, even though I haven’t been able to vlog much this past school year, I was able to finish writing a travel memoir about my Polish travels while living in Krakow. With the plan to share that book later this summer, I know it will be a nice bookend for me, regardless of its popularity. 

With summer now underway, or pretty close, and no summer camp experiences or broken ribs to flip everything into an utter mess, I’m hopeful for a break that balances it all. Yes, travel, writing, and rest. 

What that means for my blogs, I’m not sure, save the occasional update, unless I feel the need to share my every move over this season. Still, expect Forever Poland news, Niagossi Dragon Traders updates, and some plugs for current books or vlogs. 

Fox and the Girl by Jonathan Kuiper bannerA series with heart and purpose.
See, I had a reason for writing today. Specifically, today is my latest BookBub. Yep, I got selected for a second Free Reads promotion, this time it’s for my Fox and the Girl series, a book bundle covering books 1-3. I feel for Luza and Keira. Honestly, my homage to Narnia deserves better, and between trying pseudonyms, changing book titles, and series names, I’ve managed to market these books in all the wrong ways. Still, the tweens and teens who have found the series generally enjoyed the adventure presented and the story of a bullied teen who found her way, her purpose, and a friend who turned into a sister. I’m proud of the books, and that’s saying more than puffing up my chest, bragging about sales (non-existent ones), but the fact that I know this story serves. Even ten years after Luza and Riley first released, I know there’s something special about their dynamic, the life they live in New Hampshire, and the world they have to face in unsettled times, just as many of us do daily. 

If you haven’t checked out the series, it’s free for the next few weeks, so download a copy, and who knows, maybe you’ll want to buy the fourth book in the process.

Till next update, enjoy the sun wherever you may be.

​JFK

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BookBub Free Reads Review (2026): Indie Author Results with 13,000+ Downloads Across Platforms

5/5/2026

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Rusty Star book cover – gritty private investigator mystery, Stokes Case Book 1 by Jonathan KuiperRusty Star was the book being promoted.
It must have been around a decade ago when I first heard of BookBub. As an independent author, the service is virtually a slam dunk for getting fresh downloads and purchases. The first time I contemplated applying was with The Fox and the Girl series. I just finished writing the last two books, and with a completed series and virtually no traction, the idea of being selected and potentially reaching thousands of new readers was undoubtedly tempting.

Then reality set in. There was an application process and vetting, with whatever whim they decided to follow on a given day. Sure, they will say otherwise, but it’s odd how some books with few to no ratings get selected, while others with well over a hundred get no love either. Either way, it doesn’t matter. Authors know that if you can get a featured deal “Bub,” it will mean a bump in sales, regardless.

I can’t tell you how many times I applied only to be rejected. Let me think for a moment … maybe nine is the current number. That sounds about right. The first one was in 2018.  

When I wasn’t selected for this opportunity, to fork over a boatload of money to gain access to more readers, I found myself using Fussy Librarian. Over the years, this has been a reliable service, where I know I’ll get some eyes. Some genres do better than others, but I would say it’s worth the price point, even though it’s not the thousands of downloads that BookBub can bring.

To that end, I recently applied to BookBub for a featured deal and wasn’t selected. Not a big surprise at all, but what was surprising was that I was offered a slot to participate in their relatively new service, Free Reads. Full disclosure: I couldn’t find much about this (it only started in fall 2025), and what were the typical results for people who put their free books in this newsletter. 

Hence, this week’s blog shares some numbers so other writers aren’t entirely in the dark. Then again, my personal findings are interesting regardless, because without knowing the exact readership numbers to BookBub’s Free Reads newsletters and the genres they put as preferences, it’s a bit grey. I also can’t tell you how much of a bump was given by the readership versus just being at the top of the charts, and between getting movement on the Amazon and Apple algorithms.

Let’s dig into the actual numbers and interpret them accordingly. 

The price point for this promotion, to put Rusty Star in the Free Reads newsletter, was $500.00. In comparison, I paid $79.00 for Fussy Librarian. 

The Fussy Librarian promotion was in early March. All told, on Amazon, if I did the numbers right, I got 1069 downloads. On Google Books, 96, and between Apple/Barnes & Noble, because I can’t differentiate them right now, there were 483 books.

That promotion brought in 1648 downloads. From what I have observed, my ratings on Amazon went from 18 to 28, and Goodreads was in the low 20s. 

I applied to BookBub with 28 ratings and possibly one or two on Apple. 

Let’s look at the week leading up to the Free Reads promotion. In some act of cosmic humor, and maybe also to prove to me that I don’t need to pay to move any of my books, three days before the scheduled promotion, there were around 55 downloads each on Apple and Barnes & Noble. There might have been 5 on Google Books. More interestingly, 1928 downloads from Amazon. We’ll call that the Stephen Anniversary treat.

In effect, that was more than my Fussy promotion, and it was entirely just algorithm-driven. Even the rankings on Amazon were good enough to break the top 100 overall. 


PictureThe numbers the day before the Free Reads promotion. At the peak, Rusty Star was #6 Free in the Kindle Store.
The Free Reads newsletter was emailed out later that week, and things really took off. 

Amazon - 11,081 downloads over the course of my promotion. 

In a remarkable newsworthy moment, there were approximately 2200 downloads through Apple/Barnes & Noble, with roughly 1600 to Apple and 600 to Barnes & Noble. Just for fun, Google Books jumped in and contributed 703. 

All told, from April 17 to April 28, 13,984 downloads across all platforms. If I wanted to sneak in the bump earlier in the week, 15,921 downloads for half the month. 

What does this mean exactly? Well, it means I potentially gained thousands of readers this month. Ratings on Amazon have gone from 28 to 41. Now there’s no way to tell how many of those were from my mid-April bump or from the promotion. Goodreads is now at 54. Double Cross, the follow-up book, has garnered 12 sales. 

On Apple, oh how I love Apple readers, we have gone from 2 ratings to 40. Given its significantly lower downloads, that number is revealing. It means that Apple readers are more serious about their books, while the Amazon ones might just store them for a rainy day. Double Cross purchases are currently at 9. 
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And because we shouldn't leave anyone out, the ratings for Barnes and Noble are abysmal. There are zero, yes, zero ratings, despite 600 downloads. Or I simply can’t figure out where to find them. Then again, Google Books, I believe, is at five.

It’s still early in the process, but after two weeks of running the promotion, those are the numbers. I don’t know if I would do it again for the price point. Sure, I’m now showing up on more people’s recommended lists, and I can brag about being number one on several Amazon genre lists, but aside from that, I have to sit and wait to see if I make my money back. 

As an independent author, while fun to share my stories, between editing costs, book cover design, and promotions, I have yet to break even on any project. That’s the reality of my writing journey. But I love what I create and will keep finding ways to get more eyes on my catalog. 

I’ll update with more numbers at the end of May, but that’s it for today.

Later,
JFK

Update May 25 - While the Apple reviews have slowed, Amazon has taken off. Maybe it just took readers longer to get to the book. Current numbers as of this morning are Apple at 47 ratings, Amazon at 80, and Goodreads at 71.  For perspective, Apple had only a tenth as many downloads as Amazon. 

Double Cross sales over the same time are an even three on Apple and three on Amazon. 

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Off the Beaten Path in Kraków: Running the Vistula River Trails

3/11/2026

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Forever Poland a memoir by Jonathan Kuiper book cover shows a collage of various photos from PolandWorking cover for my latest book
Here’s something new to share and a bit unexpected. I have two more chapters left in my Forever Poland book. Originally started at the end of last April, I wrote the first 50,000 words before taking a break in the summer to focus on summer camp, of all things. Fast forward to writing the follow-up to Rusty Star, which, by the way, is free if you are looking for a mystery book, and since the beginning of February, I have been busy typing away at the remaining chapters of Forever Poland. 

True to every book I write, the writing process has been different, but for the most part, I have written at least 1500 words a day for the last six weeks. For that matter, the fewest words in one evening were 1000, and that was this past Friday, because of the ridiculous drumming outside the apartment building to mark another night of feasting here in Tangier. Don’t worry, I’ll blog about that sensation and the jerk who decided to almost hit me while crossing the sidewalk the other day. Maybe I’ll also add the story about the van I stared down and pointed with my umbrella when he decided he wanted to cut around a parent picking up their child. Oh yes, it’s Ramadan here in Morocco, and people are doing fabulous with their fasting and clearly looking out for the betterment of others.

Again, we’ll break down that fun at a later date. To celebrate the fact that I’m almost done with Forever Poland, here’s an excerpt from my latest chapter. Do enjoy, and I’ll be in touch soon.


Excerpt from Forever Poland 


Author Jonathan Kuiper in Krakow in front of a derelict buildingKrakow's Most Beautiful House
Shifting all the way back to August, I set out on several early morning runs to explore the city and get a feel for any area that might be worth a trip when the sun was actually out. Sure, many of my future haunts were in the direction of Dębniki or Błonia, but the Vistula River goes in the other direction as well. For one run, I wanted to see what was past Galeria Kazimierz, as it was clear the running and biking path went on for a bit, but to what end? 

Cruising along Bulwar Kurlandzki, I was immediately taken by the water, the trees, and, for that matter, the grass and fields. There were intermittent benches and places to pause for reflection. Without much effort, it felt like I was already in a quieter spot of the city. What I didn’t notice initially was that this new running route was a mixed-use area. The cycling and walking paths were separated, which was a plus, until they weren’t again, and that was a chore depending on who decided to stop and take random photos. Then again, it was a very scenic wooded route and even served as a cross-country trail whenever snow decided to blanket the area.

If I could complain for a bit about how many times the route was blocked by some idiot on their cell phone with their bike in the middle of the trail, we would be here for a while. Yes, that strikes a nerve, but not anywhere as much as the dog walkers who seemed oblivious to the fact that this is a shared trail. I’ll admit, I should have carried dog bones with me, but then again, why the locals walk their dogs on sixty-foot leashes remains one of Poland’s mysteries to me.

On not one, but multiple runs in this area, I made it a point to be out before five, simply because I wanted it all for myself. It appears I wasn’t the only one, because this old timer and his German Shepherd with a Hannibal Lector muzzle were always out at the same blasted time and on the same stretch closest to the river.

I tried to avoid them by leaving a few minutes earlier and later, but this section of bliss was too long, and the universe clearly wanted us to have frequent interactions or for me to give up and find a different loop. I’m not kidding. 

Our first introduction happened when it was still dark. I didn’t even know there was anyone on the trail, but as I came down off the incline into the meadow, I could make out a figure, most likely a walker. There was no doubt, but other than that, my angle was off, because I could barely make out a bench, and this figure was coming towards me. 

What do I know, but this guy’s massive dog was taking his jolly old time, likely just rolling around in the grass, waiting for the right moment to pounce and drive me into the waters of the Vistula. Things didn’t play out that way because, in this case, this Shepherd must have been dozing, and who knows what the old man was doing, but I startled them both. 

I jumped when the dog yelped. I might have even screamed like a little girl, and having Rin Tin Tin on such a long rope was ridiculous. The leash was for show because I knew if the dog bolted, he was either going to rip the old man’s arm off or take it with him. 

I watched the beast make his gesture towards me, clearly ready to taste an American teacher, but the guy made a simple nudge, and the attack was held off. Did he still growl at me? Did I come to a full stop and put out my hand, hoping for the best? Absolutely, but it was nerve-wracking, especially since I could barely make them out. 

We met up three to four more times because I decided I couldn’t handle the potential one time this animal broke loose. Muzzle or not, he was going to kick my ass, and I wasn’t ready for that to happen. What I wanted instead, after yet another showdown with more snarling, and the old man oblivious to “good morning,” was a means to continue my run along the river, but with less stress. I certainly didn’t want to run on the cyclist path and deal with those maniacs. 

That’s when I spotted what looked like a derelict barge on the other side of the river, and I wondered what route I needed to take in order to explore that area. As the sun rose in the east, I spotted a runner. Most certainly, I knew they could have done a huge loop, turned at the church in the woods, and then cut down. However, they managed to find that spot. I was committed to leaving this future crime scene behind and, funnily enough, traveling to a different one. 

I’m not sure if it was in late September or  October, but I know it was well before my travels took over what felt like every weekend, where I sought out this very spot. Of course, I went out in the middle of the day on a Sunday. Let me share: if the goal is to avoid people, don’t go out in Kraków on Sunday, especially not on a nice, sunny one. No one stays home. 

Granted, I get it. Once November shows up and the sun decides to disappear for three to four months, one has to take what they get. Then again, for every local who told me, “Just wait, the summer is beautiful here,” it seemed they had missed the fact that every season has its advantages. For an introvert, bring on the clouds and mixed precipitation, because unlike a sunny Sunday, families come up with alternatives to their long walks through the city and to any patch of grass along the river. 

Note, I’m not complaining here, but pointing out that this is the reality of life in Kraków. So on this magical Sunday when the temperatures shot up to a balmy seventy degrees, I wasn’t alone even when I hoped to be. Trust me, I went on a roundabout loop to get to this barge with a good exploration of the area after I spotted the familiar tour buggies and the troop of people gawking and waiting for their chance to get into Schindler’s Factory. Everyone is playing tourist on Sunday, and those who aren’t are probably young families out for a walk and some ice cream.

I remember cutting along Jana Dekerta, passing the athletic field where a kid’s soccer match was underway, and thinking to myself, "This explains the random ghosts on various buildings in town." Others are trying to scare people from visiting. 

Zabłocie wasn’t overwhelmed with families, but more like the university students who were now only waking up and trying to figure out what they were going to eat, before swarming the river’s edge. Still, it was bearable, and I was committed to getting to this barge. Next, I was walking past Park Stacja Wisła, which is actually quite lovely and an easy jump over to Bulwar Lotników Alianckich, where the creepy vibes begin.

In the early morning hours, this entire stretch is sketchy. It’s not from the dog walkers either, but just the energy between the fact that the paved area looks like a place you would find people taking their car to drop trash or a body. It’s one or the other. 

The running trail directly above feels off to me, too. I’m not talking about the unevenness of it all. Then again, if you want to run underneath a bridge and get that whole hitting your head vibe, or check out the latest graffiti, this might be your best chance to do just that in this area. Granted, it could also just be that I know in the opposite direction; this path got swallowed up by the construction. It could be better now with the railroad bridge finished, and yet, even on my last visit, as I walked this familiar route, I was waiting for the other shoe to drop. 

I just can’t figure out whether the boat landing is actually in use or is a stand-in for some nefarious activity. Not even out for a run but walking this route, I have yet to see a boat tie up and pick up any passengers, even though there is a glut of watercraft farther down the river, in direct proximity to Wawel Castle. Why the dock and the mooring bollards?

A little farther down is where the real fun begins, honestly. One would need to be blind not to see the wanna be crack house on the river’s edge with the boats rusting away in its not-so-well-manicured yard.  I never took the time to learn whether this building, or what was left of it, was the headquarters for the old shipping fleet, or whatever owned and managed these barges and boats that had seen far better days. 

I wanted to check out the boat, the same one I spotted across the river, but first I had to deal with the fact that this boarded-up house and a half-ass fence kept me from accomplishing my goal. Hearing several voices and noticing through the fence that at least two people were exploring the same area, I cut through the grass and towards the river’s edge. It seemed the least suspect way of entering this fray, not to mention the closer I got to the house, I was one hundred percent sure some squatter or squatters on a drug binge were going to be racing out the one open window or door where the boards were half removed or cast aside entirely. 

Maybe someone was living there, or maybe people were using it as a drug den. I didn’t dare go inside, knowing that my luck would run out faster than me removing the muzzle from that Shepherd. No, it made more sense to trek through the rusted remains of a boat graveyard wearing nothing but a t-shirt and shorts, seeing if my Tetantus shot was up to date.  

The two other explorers were already on the old boat by the time I found a clear route into the back area. As I watched them climb around that corroded bucket and make their way to the wheel of the ship, I had no interest in joining them. I was already likely trespassing, just like these two men, and didn’t see how joining them and pretending we were buddies on a fishing trip would improve my situation. 

No, it was far easier to cut across the yard to the second boat, a far more decayed structure with some serious oxidation issues, but easier to climb onto and enjoy the view of the river. My plan seemed good until I spotted a man and a woman beating me to it. Thinking they would be quick and then return to their walk, I looked at the rear of the boat, already spraypainted to the nines, and kept meandering towards the water to make it appear that I wasn’t hoping to join in on the fun. 

In true, this can only happen to me, fashion, I looked out across the river, probably a hundred feet from that rust bucket, and marveled at the crowds of people lining the beach and the very route where the Shepherd roamed. Delighted that I was correct in my assessment, aside from the crackhouse, this seemed to be a far superior spot. Then again, the animal sounds coming from the boat told me that three was a crowd. The fact that I caught a glimpse of the blonde woman’s head disappearing beneath the rails made me wonder. Where her partner went, I didn’t stay long enough to figure out, but I did look back long enough to see what remained of that cabin shaking. Hopefully, they were both up to date on their shots.

As for my new spot that also served as a lover’s nest, I can share that it was the only time I saw or heard any of that funky stuff going on. When the winter weather came, all that remained was the sketchy house and the bones of each boat. Call it a sunny Sunday that caused the riffraff or bored locals to come out to play, but on future visits, the place was all mine. 
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Last time I checked, I believe the building has been razed, but the boats remain, a reminder of the city’s glorious past on one of Poland’s great rivers. Then again, for me, it was simply a more unusual, yet quieter, off-the-beaten-path location to enjoy, that didn’t entail me walking toward Wawel Castle, taking the balloon ride, or seeing which dogs were going to have their way with me across the river…..

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Double Cross Is Out Today

2/10/2026

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Double Cross - A Stokes Case novel book cover shows Russell Stokes on the case in the middle of a snowstorm
Here’s some exciting news to share — the follow-up to Rusty Star is ready for your eyes.

​Double Cross is out now. Check out the description below and grab your copy. The book is available in ebook and paperback formats.

If you haven’t read the first book in the series, Rusty Star is currently $0.99 for the next few weeks.

Enjoy both books, and as always, I’d love to hear what you think.


Three ghosts. Two murders. One man running out of second chances.


Haunted by the death of the woman he loved, former Navy investigator Russell Stokes is barely holding it together when an old service friend drags him into the cold. Tommy Delaney is wanted for a brutal double murder in northern New Hampshire—and he insists he’s innocent.

Heading north, Stokes finds more than he bargained for: a town that guards its secrets, a trail of blood, and a plea from his former mentor, Rear Admiral Radner, to find Grace—the missing daughter of Stokes’s estranged former commanding officer, whose actions forced him to resign his commission.

As the murders and Grace’s disappearance twist together, Stokes is forced to confront loyalty, guilt, and corruption in ways he never imagined. Every choice tests his conscience, every lead reveals a betrayal, and every step brings him closer to the truth—and to the ghosts he can’t outrun.

Double Cross: A Stokes Case Novel is a gripping, fast-paced New England thriller of loss, redemption, and the thin line between justice and obsession.

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Behind the Scenes: Double Cross-A Russell Stokes Case Gets Its Official Description

11/16/2025

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With my escape to England now complete, it only makes sense to share a proper description for my new Russell Stokes book. Let's be clear now, this description is simply a preview for the upcoming book that will be out in spring 2026.  I still have to send it off to my copy editor before I can schedule the actual release date.

The greater question is does this book interest you? Have you read the first book in the series, because if you haven't that's where we first meet Russell and see the events that immediately lead to Double Cross. I know I'm tooting my own horn, but it's honestly worth a look. As for the new book, I think it's the best one I've written out of the twenty one books composed over the years.
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Double Cross: A Stokes Case #2
Three ghosts. Two murders. One man running out of second chances.



Haunted by the death of the woman he loved, former Navy investigator Russell Stokes is barely holding it together when an old service friend drags him into the cold. Tommy Delaney is wanted for a brutal double murder in northern New Hampshire—and he insists he’s innocent.

​Heading north, Stokes finds more than he bargained for: a town that guards its secrets, a trail of blood, and a plea from his former mentor, Rear Admiral Radner, to find Grace—the missing daughter of Stokes’s estranged former commanding officer, whose actions forced him to resign his commission.

As the murders and Grace’s disappearance twist together, Stokes is forced to confront loyalty, guilt, and corruption in ways he never imagined. Every choice tests his conscience, every lead reveals a betrayal, and every step brings him closer to the truth—and to the ghosts he can’t outrun.

Double Cross: A Russell Stokes Case is a gripping, fast-paced New England thriller of loss, redemption, and the thin line between justice and obsession.
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Finishing “Double Cross”: Writing Through Chaos in Tangier

11/6/2025

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Tangier Bay with water view of Spain and Gibraltar.Early morning in Tangier as I started the last chapter in Double Cross.
An amazing thing happened today; relatively speaking, I finished Double Cross, the second book in my Russell Stokes series, A Stokes Case Novel. That’s right, time for a good old pat on the back while I hear the saws in the distance, hammering, and whatever else this blasted city of Tangier feels the need to throw at me during this writing escapade.

Trust me, it was one. I started back in mid-September, intending to be done one way or another by November 6. This might seem like an arbitrary date, but I also occasionally play a travel vlogger, and frankly, I didn’t want to balance both when my fall and winter travels started. It’s one thing to work on a memoir like Forever Poland, as it’s a different type of writing, but fiction and travel vlogging are on different ends of my creative spectrum. The headspace it takes to deal with Russell and his life doesn’t translate at all to walking around city streets, exploring parks, churches, and cemeteries. I wish it did, but I need proper recovery after being in Russell’s world. 

Speaking of his world, the final numbers for Double Cross are 107,856 words for draft number one. We might lose a few thousand words once the edits are complete, or then again, we might gain a few. Every book I write is unique in that phase of the writing process. All told, though, this is my third-longest book written and the longest in ten years. Yes, ten years or is it eleven when I wrote Swimming with Angels and Going Home?

Initially, I thought I might finish Russell’s second story up last weekend, but after a pivotal scene, the final act of the book took longer than expected. It wasn’t from a lack of trying to tie things up, just sometimes the characters lead you in different directions, and you have to stay aligned with the story that is being told. 

In true Tangier, Morocco fashion this last week has been anything but easy. I had comments due for end-of-quarter grades, which again taps a different mindset, and the city itself wanted to rear its noisiest, most unruly self in months, by giving me three straight days of music outside my apartment window. I could have managed with a jazzy ambiance, but the bloody drummers and screeching singer straight from my wedding hell story in Asilah showed up again. This time, we had the echo effect in full force, with fireworks for added flair, and two hours of performing, followed by a one-hour DJ interlude, a few stories below my apartment window.

The glorified Thai Wok restaurant, which also poses as a pizza and shwarma destination, deemed it necessary to crank the bass after this show, forcing me to retreat to my back bedroom, close the doors and windows for a bit of sanity, all while I rushed to complete more of the story. I might have laughed it off, but the owners of the apartments above and below mine decided this was also the weekend and early week time to start their annual renovations. 

You try writing anything with intermittent hammering echoing through your writing cave. It’s not easy, and frankly, it's more draining than crafting the story itself. For whatever reason, any construction has to take place on Saturday from morning into the evening. There was no reprieve. And if it’s a holiday, don’t worry, there seems to be even more noise and construction to contend with. 

Even now, as I compose this piece, the bastard hammering away, on a Moroccan holiday no less, could give two hoots at the creative juices I’ve attempted to spew and share. 
Sunday was more of the same, but this time we replaced the wedding horror music with dance music that had no business being played at any time of day, let alone an outside venue. I practically prayed for more hammering to mask the sounds, but alas, the construction detail only showed for the morning hours before the restaurant had even opened. 

Fast forward to the last three days, and my internet connection has been spotty at best. Currently, it’s not even connecting because Orange has decided to perform maintenance again, just as they did in June, when I didn’t have working service for three weeks. If my memory serves, they claimed it was from the Spanish power outage, but news flash: is Morocco part of the same power grid, or do we just want to blame vacation time and shoddy service? I lean towards the service side of things, especially since the credit they gave me was never actually applied, and they simply collected payment as though nothing had happened. 

I would wave to the Orange sales center directly across the street to expedite things. Still, if it’s anything like June, the unhelpful sales clerk will direct me to call customer service, which refuses to put English speakers on the line because it hurts their customer service ratings. No joke. I wonder if they are up and running or if it’s just my building suffering through the dark void of no internet. 

That put a hiccup on looking up things to finish the novel, but again, we persevered. To celebrate this monumental accomplishment, it’s time for a proper rest, and I’ll get back to it early next week. In the meantime, if you haven’t checked out Rusty Star, the first book in this series, it’s out and waiting for your eyes only. Double Cross will join the fray in the spring. 

Till next update, have a good one.



Drumming that I tried to write through
(True to form, the internet connection delayed this posting. We don’t want things to be to easy, do we?)

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Mean People Suck: What a Decade of Writing (and Living) Has Taught Me About Toxicity

10/29/2025

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Symbolic photograph of weight on people during the holidays as shown with a ton of snow on the back porch.The weight of the world for many of us during the upcoming winter season.
Dare I say these words in the first sentence of today’s blog ― you know those words ― mean people suck. Maybe something more substantial is needed. Let’s not just say all people, like I’m classifying every single person in the world. No, I’ll be more specific this morning and focus solely on my fellow Americans, especially the Karens and all those entitled schmucks who think their opinion is the only one that matters. 

Granted, I will admit it’s a tough lead to start with, especially as I’m writing this with the intention that says my opinion is more valid and important than these sorry individuals. But then again, you’ve come to this forum for Jonathan Kuiper, so here’s an opinion you might want and a perspective that could be helpful in the days ahead. Especially, with the holidays fast approaching, tensions are stoked everywhere, and people continue to lose patience with one another. Everyone has an opinion, so you decide if it’s worth the money you paid for it. 
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Did you see that joke I made? That’s taken right from Dave Ramsey’s mouth and his radio show. I got to give credit to the source on that one. I digress . . .


When Everyone Has an Opinion (and None of Them Are Kind)


Let’s dive into the topic at hand and what’s got me thinking this morning about people, toxicity, and how it emanates everywhere. 

Here in Morocco, it’s a different beast altogether, simply because I don’t understand the language or culture enough to state whether it exists at all. I imagine it does, but still, I work at an international school, so I’m around kids, adults, and the entire educational dynamic that is a microcosm for the same issues we will be diving into. Not wanting to focus on work for a moment, because who cares about that, let’s talk about My Shenandoah Love instead.

I wrote this new adult romance in the summer of 2014. I remember it well because it was right after I grinded away at Going Home. The story was a perfect reprieve and counterbalance to Vincent and Christian, and their final story together as lead characters. For two weeks, I was consumed with Hannah’s story. 

Quick side note. I had just moved from my writing retreat for the summer, a studio apartment in Newmarket, New Hampshire, to an in-law loft studio in bucolic Gilmanton, New Hampshire. Surrounded by lakes, trees, and peace of mind, this was my stomping ground for the upcoming school year. I might have been there a day or two, waiting for my furniture to arrive, when I drove over to Johnson’s Dairy Bar in New Durham, where this beautiful woman with long, flowing, strawberry blonde hair captivated my attention. 

To this day, I have no clue how old she was, but I’m confident she was late teens or even twenty, a college student working her summer gig before returning to school in the fall. I remember getting my ice cream from this girl and then retreating to a picnic table to savor every lick and bite. By the time I was done with my dessert and driving home, Hannah Jones had been created.

Knowing that I needed some conflict and a proper love triangle to be set up, I brainstormed salacious ideas. Why not make one conflict where Hannah and her mother were interested in the same married man? I know, scandalous, right? It gets better, let’s throw a minister into the mix who can’t keep his Johnson under control (see that another joke) while he’s with one woman, but trying to make his best move on young Hannah. This is the perfect combination for disaster, and someone’s getting hurt in the end. 

Just thinking about the storyline makes me smile, as the character dynamics were interesting and, honestly, truthful to how people really are. That’s where we shift to the topic of the day. After the book was written, I had my editors go through the manuscript and release the story. For some reason, most likely to get new readers, I posted the first chapter on a writing community website challenge.
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What Writing Taught Me About Toxic People


Funny picture of three stuffed animals, a fox, a deer, and llama pretending to post hateful comments onlineEven animals get in on the online hate.
Let me tell you this: most of my fellow writers are a-holes. Sorry, it’s true. At the very least, many are difficult people. Seriously, you get people of all walks on these sites. Many have an axe to grind and are simply on it to ruin another person’s day. They also believe that public forums are fair game to share uncensored opinions, right or wrong. We have those across the spectrum, with some who look for the positive, some who post irrational responses, and others who just want attention. I imagine there are other categories I’m leaving out, but you get the idea. 

Anyway, on this community site, I had the book up for three days, maybe less, when the comments started coming in. One reader (writer in disguise) wanted me to know that my northern Virginia location wasn’t authentic to the area. Newsflash, the story takes place in Front Royal, where I worked for five years. I’m pretty sure it’s authentic unless you live in a hole. Another reader said the entire exchange between mother and daughter was unrealistic. No mother would call their child names, let alone the words I used. While I would love to share those words with you, they weren’t nice ones, but having been around teens, young adults, and parents for years, let alone going through the life cycle myself, I can assure you that some families swear at each other.

Then the real heavy hitters came in, those readers who wanted me to know that my story wasn’t politically correct. OMG, the horror of it all. What was I doing? There were other, more telling ways to create this tale of new adult woe, without using obscene vocabulary and having characters put down one another. Didn’t you know that no one ever puts anyone down? No one swears in this world? And a sixteen-year-old having a crush on the early twenties deputy, that would never happen. 

I took the posting down, annoyed with the feedback. There was no need to play the game, nor was I going to have a chance to win the contest that was being offered, simply because the comment police was out in force and had missed the fact that I’m a product of the 1980s and won’t cave to a climate where people in books are fake and not real to the reality we live in. The next time you see college students speaking Old English or with a Victorian vernacular, do let me know where the performance is being held.

That being said, I gave up on putting my books or samples on writing community sites. If you are only going to read the first page and miss the entire purpose of the story, it’s all good from my perspective, but I don’t want or need to hear your opinion on the matter. For me, this shifted the narratives for book reviews, period. Amazon, at the time, was notorious for letting anyone post a review even if they clearly didn’t read the book, let alone purchase the work. I had one person for Running With Vince, write something like, “No one cares about you and your twin brother. This book sucks.” 

Then again, I had readers who were simply stupid. Did you read the book summary before opening it? If you knew it was in the first person, why did you keep reading? Because I couldn’t resist, look at these two reviews for Our Place by the Sea from Amazon. “A very short story. I dislike storytelling in the first person. I felt sad after finishing the story. I was bored reading it.” Or “I did not enjoy reading this, very self-absorbed, so I stopped reading. It is not about nature, as I had hoped.”
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Choosing Empathy in a World Full of Karens


A picture of Relax - Apple Juice from CzechiaPerfect advice for us all in this Internet-Social Media Era
I’m sharing this because everyone is honored for their opinion, simply by merit, but then again, it’s how we choose to respond to those opinions that matter. In writing, at this stage, ten plus years later, I don’t care either way. Whatever the story becomes is true to what I wanted readers to encounter. If you think it’s not realistic, fine, bless your heart. If you don’t like the story, for any reason, that’s fine too. I hear there are millions of other books, including AI ones, that will tickle your fancy. 

My issue continues to be with people who make comments not on my books, but just online, period, social media, YouTube, who I know are hiding behind their screens and wouldn’t do it in person. If they did it in person, we all know it would be a different encounter completely. That’s not intended to be a threat; I’m simply sharing that many people think the screen is a place for them to spew out whatever they want, regardless of the consequences. 

By spewing out hate, for many of them, it’s created such a toxic climate that many of us don’t want to doom scroll, check the news, or do anything online, because it carries over into the real world. I certainly don’t need to see or want in my feed political commentary that in my younger days was not posted for the entire community to see.

Words, at the end of the day, can be hurtful. It’s true, and we don’t know the reader’s perspective or their life story, so posting or commenting on something in a manner that creates divisiveness is irresponsible and creates a dark cloud over the entire matter. That’s the bottom line. 

At least with a book, if you don’t like it, you can put it down and read something that is more aligned with your values and thought patterns. We can’t necessarily do that when we are posting pictures or videos for friends and family, in an attempt to maintain connection (and sometimes for validation) only to get knocked down repeatedly by the trolls out there.

In school, I see this daily. Kids are simply trying to find their way in this world and discover who they are, but their community and their families impact how this path will go. You can’t model hateful, entitled things and not expect the next generation, the one you are raising, to do the same. 

Again, books are books. It’s a fictional release, just like a horror movie is going to create a thrill or a fright; it’s not reality, and can be swapped out. But when people belittle others in a public place, a restaurant, because their food was too cold or not enough salt was added, or the item they purchased was missing a bloody screw, it’s not the person’s fault who is dealing with the brunt of the attack. 

Even if it was their fault, what right do you have to take it out on them? Does it really matter in the scheme of your life whether a cup of coffee was hot enough? Are you so important that if someone who is consumed with their family struggle cuts you off on the highway, that it means you need to do the same? 

At the end of the day, on the web or in person, people are doing their best to manage. We can either make it easier on each other or be the reason another person’s day shifts to a more miserable one. As we shift to Thanksgiving, Christmas, and the New Year, do you need to be part of the problem or part of the solution? That’s what you have to ask yourself. Is it really worth posting that comment or can you let it be? 

Just some food for thought, from somebody who cares. 
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Zalipie – Inside Poland’s Painted Village (Forever Poland Excerpt, Part II)

10/12/2025

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In the spirit of my Poland travels, I've been working on a memoir that encompasses all of my trips while living in Poland. The working title of the book is Forever Poland. Right now, I'm about 50,000 words in. With the follow-up to Rusty Star ongoing, the second part of Forever Poland has to wait til January for the proper time to revisit the book and finish the remaining chapters.
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I wanted to share more of the writing process, so here's part two of my trip to Zalipie, which I also documented in a YouTube video blog on Travel with Mr. Jon. I'll include that at the end for your viewing pleasure. In the meantime, grab some coffee or tea and indulge in this first draft of my road trip to Poland's happiest and prettiest Village.

The Final Drive to Poland's Happiest Village


Rain seemed to follow me everywhere in Poland, and I wasn’t shocked it was on the horizon, nor that it wanted to do so on my final day vlogging in the country. As we drove away and found ourselves on yet another side road, it truly felt like a one-way route; I couldn't help but consider the weather. The idea of a flooded path crossed my mind again, even though I didn’t think it would happen to us at that moment. 

No, it made far more sense as several cars raced by us, with our vehicle hugging the side of the road, doing its best not to drive off the nonexistent curb, to have the weather come on the return drive. Only then could we embrace this road to its full effect and correctly figure out all the low points and where we might be stranded and fodder for the dziki. 

I took a moment to glance out at the fields and the marsh we found ourselves driving across, wondering what village we would explore next. While I know I counted down till our next pull over, the clouds continued to darken. Even now, I have to think to myself what the worst weather day I dealt with was. There was torrential rain in Pzemsyl a few weeks earlier. That had to have been the worst, as I was thoroughly soaked and had only found refuge in the churches of all places. True story, I knew I couldn’t make it to the hotel fast enough, but this one church I had visited before and been locked out of was miraculously open on my return trip, eager for my eyes and for me to sit, to get a break from the nonstop rain. Come to think of it, every church in that area was unlocked. It was divine intervention when I grabbed my umbrella and spent the next hour going in and out of churches while Mother Nature did her best to ruin my filming experience.

We had no churches on this road to Zalipie, which was unpleasant to say the least. Thankfully, there were signs that we were close. Not even five minutes from the village, I spotted a shrine on the side of the road in front of a lovely modern family home. Dana pulled over to entertain my creative urge. I walked across the street and marveled at this dedication from 1903. I had no clue what the inscription said, and I should have asked for a proper translation, but what I did find that warmed my heart were the flowers on all four sides of the structure. 

Freshly painted, in the last year for sure, these were the Zalipie standard, at the very least inspired. Hand-painted with lots of color and designs, I knew we weren’t far from our final destination. These flowers were distinct in pattern and drawn the same way that had been passed down for generations, from the 19th century to the present. I loved the lupine and the roses. Honestly, each side felt like a touch of spring and summer. These were the wild flowers you would pick for your lover or your mother to smell and enjoy at home. 

Not far from this yard, we found ourselves at the wooden sign for Zalipie. If you weren’t looking for it, you would likely have driven right by on this busier main road, which made me think we took the scenic route. Had it not been for the metal fence barrier protecting the wooden structure from renegade bikes and perhaps an occasional car, we wouldn’t have spotted this side road entrance to the quiet village. 

The distinct folk art was out in the open with more flowers in what I would best describe as floral wallpaper for those who couldn’t afford any. Stenciling, gone mad, would be even more appropriate.

Let's Paint Everything


One more kilometer of driving and it was clear we had arrived at Poland’s happiest village or perhaps most gaudy. I kid a little, but when I spotted the fire department and saw the etched flower pattern underneath the windows and over the doors, it was a bit much for me. Granted, it could have been the contrast in colors, with the orange, yellow, blue, and red, but it seemed like they were forcing the tradition onto a building that didn’t need an arrangement. 

I’m sure Instagrammers would swoon over a fire department with hot red truck doors, a metal roof, and primarily a building in a greyish tone aside from the flowers and the red lining around the windows. I shrugged because I wanted to see the old village homes, one-room houses, or three-room dachas where you knew your grandparents were raised, and had to do everything without modern conveniences. That’s what I was looking for, not a bloody cement building that you tried to liven up with a stitch pattern.

Still, at the fire department, the flowers were everywhere. Who cares if I felt like I was in Kansas, among crops, fields, and only the occasional tree? Across the street, I saw what I believed was a church from the distinct wooden cross. The building itself was nothing to write home about, but all the windows had large bouquets, adorning the area, making you feel as though flowers were growing on the walls and through the cracks. I knew, though, from my limited research, the real show was the inside. 

I decided at this point to keep walking and spotted a brand new cement one-level house farther down the street that required my attention. The perfect cobblestone driveway gave away the newness of this house, and more importantly, a weird vibe. Although these same flower designs were prevalent, they felt forced. Did I say I was disappointed? I’m not trying to be negative, but I'm being honest about the fact that I just assumed the only houses with flowers were the old wooden ones. To me, it seemed like whoever built this structure was like, “Oh, we better put some flowers around the windows. And instead of painting the outside white, as they would have done in the past, we’ll have sections that are white with colorful flowers. Let’s make sure these overhead spaces can be removed if necessary.” 

Honestly, it felt weird. I was more excited to get away from this building and walk down the street to Dana and the car, wondering if she had spotted the traditional houses or if this was going to be some sham tour. As I was about to ask her if she had found out anything new or seen something better than what I had, the wheat crop became the real show. 

Let’s talk about something cool. I'm in my early forties, and I have never stepped foot in a field full of barley. This was amazing and beautiful. Had the rain not begun to fall, I likely would have considered taking a run or at least a walk through this illustrious area, to take on the role of Maximus in Gladiator when he did the same at the end of Gladiator. Don’t get me wrong, this wasn’t Pienza, Italy, but the energy felt similar to me. Sure, the barley or wheat wasn’t that high either, but it was still in the same spirit.
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A Real House Tour



My opinion of Zalipie began to shift at this moment. The modern build across the street, with its high-end metal gate and painted flower trim, did little to sway the fact that older homes on the horizon begged for attention. A house for sale on the right did nothing for me, but what appeared to be the original home in front made the folk art come alive. There was no denying the large dandelion bushes and the flower-filled bouquet on the backside of the building, with a complementary lower lining of brown daisies guarding the bottom. 
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I still wanted to see more, as we were on the upswing. This street appeared to have more potential. As the houses were farther apart, intermittently placed with fields in between them and the occasional grouping of trees, the jackpot was a short walk away. Dana was indispensable at this point. 

Part of me was ready to simply film the outside of the best house we had found, one that could have been the selling part for any Instagrammer, but she was adamant that we go in through the gate and see about touring the house itself. I’ll be the first to say, I wouldn’t have done this without her. Even though this little hamlet is known to get tourists, as a New Englander, we don’t just walk into someone’s house without permission, let alone onto their property. 

Dana was confident we could. As I stood across the street and waited for the sign, she went across the threshold and talked to the older woman, the caretaker of the house. Only after getting her blessing, did I resume filming and take in what was the pivotal moment of this village tour. To begin, this house from the outside was immaculate. This woman and her family, for the previous sixty years, had painstakingly cared for this home. 

The grass was trimmed, flowers aligned the property, especially the rose bushes, which were cut back enough to allow each stem and blossom to flourish. It was a property that my grandmother would have been proud to see, and it brought me back to her rose bushes in Tucson, Arizona. 

I tried to take it all in, even as I provided commentary on my camera. Even now, as I think back, I rewatch the clips and smile. The metal gate had sections painted with white flower designs, and the outside of the house was covered in bouquets perfectly hand-drawn in between freshly painted window frames. I preferred the colorful assortment of flowers serving as the trim between the outer wall and the foundation. 

The fruit trees added to the ambiance, along with the hand-painted well, benches, and barn. Nothing was left untouched, even the pail that was used for the well, the flower pots, or the dog house. With each step, you were taken back in time, and got a glimpse of what these women did to brighten up family homes that were covered in soot. 

Crossing the threshold into the house, this wasn’t some hoarder’s home, but a real place you would look forward to visiting and spending time in. More art filled the walls, with the familiar trim and etchings of free-hand sketched flowers. In the United States, we might use wallpaper or stenciling to get the perfect alignment and array of these floral designs; this was an art form in itself in Zalipie.

Our hostess explained how her great-grandmother had learned the craft and had passed it down through generations, with her now doing the same for her daughter. This wasn’t a gift for the men in the family to learn; they could only appreciate the tradition these women and others like them continued to share and imitate. 

What I loved the most from being inside, aside from our hostess’s hospitality, was the brightness of the white walls mixed in with all the flowers. Truly, there was such warmth in each room, especially where the food was prepared. The old wooden stove that I was more familiar with seeing in rural Ukraine was here as well. Just as with the walls, every surface was painted. Where the wood would be placed to keep the fire going, so one could boil their water or cook their afternoon meal, a myriad of bouquets and colors livened up the space. 

I wondered how long it took to paint these beauties and how often they would refresh. If these women were anything like my sister, who seems to repaint her walls on an annual basis, I would surmise that each season the walls were painted over in white, and then the flowers appeared shortly thereafter. They were too vibrant to have been there for a more extended period, but then again, I could be wrong. 

One Pretty House


Author Jonathan Kuiper in Zalipie, Poland, pointing to a traditional wooden cottage decorated with hand-painted floral folk art, part of his Forever Poland memoir travels.
When the house tour ended and we were back on the roadside, I was relieved to get a proper glimpse into this area’s past and the traditions that had begun a hundred and fifty years earlier. Not far from this masterpiece, across the street, I found an even more delightful home. Between the white picket fence with our favorite flowers aligning every few posts and a handful of trees guarding the entrance, this one-level home with a red wooden thatched roof and white painted boards was what I hoped to encounter. 
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Between the bright blue window trim and matching door, the flowers were simply the icing on the cake. Placed between each window frame, there was nothing left uncovered, and that was okay with me. This was just folk beauty at its finest. 

The best part was above the door frame. What I would label a little touch of heaven, placed over a simple red and purple design, was a horseshoe and dried up lavender, or perhaps mistletoe, mugwort, or some other bundle of dried herbs. I wasn’t sure as to the meaning of the placement, whether it was to ward off spirits or specific bugs, but I knew this was a proper folk tradition. 

Looking at the entire scene before me, with the fields and the storm passing overhead, I could imagine myself in 19th-century Polish countryside, and for that I was thankful. 

While my folk art palate was finally satisfied, I found myself crossing the street and down someone’s private road after I caught a glimpse of one of my favorite things to see in Poland. How I spotted this remains a mystery to me, especially as I walked for a couple of minutes past my new love, the wheat fields, and to the edge of someone’s house. There, on the edge, tucked behind the shrubs and a modern metal gate, stood a family shrine to Mary. 

I was tempted to open the gate and read the inscription, but it was enough to see the cross and Mary within the glass enclosure. First, Boratyn and then in places like Przemysl, Krosno, and Skawina, this was another fitting reminder of how things are done in rural Poland. Outside the big cities, these artifacts and relics show the Roman Catholic traditions of this country.

Our journey to Zalipie concluded a few minutes later, but only after we found ourselves at the village center and their meeting house. With multiple maps, any visitor could easily see that Dana and I had only started the exploration of Poland’s happiest village. I was taken aback by the number of homes listed, and for that matter, the distances it would take to walk and explore each one. No, they weren’t all next to each other, not in the least.

And yet, that was okay. We got a taste of the traditions that the women of the area had been passing down through generations to brighten their homes and so that other locals would know who the eligible brides to be were. As I did a final walk-through of the visitor center and explored the various hallways, adorned with the same vibrant flowers I had seen in my new favorite home, I heard and saw little girls running in the hallway. 

Laughter and giggles livened up the entire space, serving as a fitting tribute to their mothers, who met in the adjacent room, where they painted and stitched. While the wooden homes will eventually need to be replaced by more modern ones, it’s safe to say that the traditions will continue in this part of Poland, and for that, I’m grateful.

I, for one, took this last vlogging trip in stride. As with many of my adventures, I didn’t know what to expect, what was real, and what was going to be grossly exaggerated. What was nice to see was the lack of tourists gracing this area, and that it was more than just flowers that made the journey worthwhile. Truly, the high points for me, aside from the company, were the elephants and the cemetery. I enjoyed the flowers too, but come on, where else could I relieve Maximus’s final dream sequence? Yes, that, my friends, is what Poland is all about. 


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    • Jones Family
    • The Vincent Chronicles
    • Seli
  • Non-fiction